I agree with your persuasive opinion, but I think the advantages of robots to us are as much as the disadvantages you say. To refute your claim that jobs will disappear, as much as jobs will disappear as you appear on robots. This is because there are hundreds of unfamiliar jobs that you don't know about. So I have a little different idea from your opinion. But I think it turned out to be a good essay because the intro gave me a twist.