Hello, Jimin. I'm Seongmin. I read your essay well.

Overall, your ideas are similar to mine. In the third part of your grounds, however, you explained that robots in the workplace can avoid the spread of illness like flu. You came up with a creative idea which I didn't think of. Nowadays, lots of people cannot live comfortable lives because of COVID-19. There are people who are especially vulnerable to COVID-19 because of their jobs. The introduction of robots can be an innovative alternative. It'll prevent many people from infection.

Therefore, I agree with your opinion definitely.