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Your essay is good, but I don't agree with some parts. You said that robots should not replace human in the workplace because people who used to work in simple labor, which has high probability to disappear, cannot get new jobs without further learning. However, as times change, it is natural that jobs required by society change. Just as a lot of manpower was replaced by machine power when James Watt invented the steam engine in the late eighteenth century. We must develop our own abilities according to changes in society.