송영인 2019.06.19 15:52

I respect your opinion, but I don't agree with it. I think that there are some errors in your basis. Firstly, you said that game addiction is fit for the definition of desease in your essay, but there are various kind of disease and we can't express them with only one definition. If we do, it will contain too wide range so we can consider everything as a disease. For example, according to definition of disease in your essay, If someone who loves exercising goes to gym every day, he or she should be considered as a patient because excessive exercising can damage your body. Definition of disease in your essay is not detailed enough so I think it can't be the right basis for your opinion. Secondly, you mentioned about health problem caused by game in your essay, but it is not limited to game. We can also get some health problem while we studying or reading novels. Then, should we define studying addiction as a disease and regulate people who study too much by some laws? Of course we should try to cure the people who damaged their health, but we should not limit people's behavior by defining it as a disease.