송영인 2019.06.19 16:37

Though I can see some logical basis in your essay, I don't agree with your opinion. You mentioned many bad effacts of game in your essay say that game addiction is as bad as disease, but game has not anly bad effacts, but also good effacts. You can enhance your personal relationship by sharing game as habby with your friends or family. And some people make game as an artist and express their thinking by game, so it has some artistic value. The word 'disease' usually means something have only bad points. So, according to definition of disease in your essay, game should not treated as a disease. And you said that many teenagers learn bad things through game through game, but they also learn how to cooperate and communicate with others. And in the case of bad words, It is not the problem of game, it is the problem of bad internet culture. So we can try to improve internet culture to teach teenagers to use better words.
장호승 2019.06.23 23:31

송영인 : 1223 장호승 I agree with you that game has lots of good effects. What I wanted to say is 'game addiction' can be harmful to our daily life, not playing game itself. I think enjoying game as a hobby for few hour is ok. But if you get addicted to games and spend too much time playing it, your personality may turn violent and you may not even distinguish between reality and the virtual world. That's the point of my opinion.